Bloody Mirror

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Pink Pineapple (Veteran Zoner) on Thursday, 27-Oct-2005 18:14:47

Author's note: This is more of a song than a poem.
Bloody Mirror
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You saw me on the ground.
And you beat me further down.
You saw mecrying out.
And you pushed your way around.
See me scream.
As I dream in my death.
See me bleed.
As I breathe my last breath.
I'm looking in to this bloody mirror.
And I see you looking back at me
I cry because of this bloody mirror.
My handprints stain the glass as I scream.
You saw my heart bleeding.
And you saw my face breathing.
You saw my eyes crying.
And I'm laying here dying.
See me scream as I dream in my death.
See me bleed as I breathe my last breath.
Your eyes behind these evil shadow's.
Pouring salt on the wound.
You are now nothing I want to know.
Everything will be over soon.

Post 2 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Thursday, 27-Oct-2005 18:30:59

I haven't read this er, friend who I don't know what to call on this cite because she hates her name... but it's.. cool

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Friday, 28-Oct-2005 9:27:11

Why doesn't she smash the mirror or does she need the pain in some perverse way.

Post 4 by poet (The premium poet) on Monday, 31-Oct-2005 14:54:36

That excellently written. It was, however, extremely sad.

Post 5 by Pink Pineapple (Veteran Zoner) on Monday, 31-Oct-2005 17:06:55

I know it was sad, thanks for reading it though